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Writing to win!!!! The theme of my wikispaces is soccer. You have to practice hard to achieve your goal. There might be some days that you fall down. But you just have to pick yourself up and work even harder. If you make a mistake, you should look back at your mistake and try to make it better. When you have reached your goal, make another goal that is even harder. My writing this year is like a soccer game. Some days I will do really good, and the other days I am off my game. I write fast with all my thoughts, like a running soccer player. The fans motivate me to get a goal just like my teacher motivates me to write. You have to practice writing before you go into the big game. So that means you have to make rough drafts before your essay like a soccer player working out. The hardest thing for me is getting that idea and trying to right about it. It has been difficult for me, because I get off the subject and start thinking of other things. Wants I got ideas down, I can organize my paper in the correct form. I have the introduction paragraph, the body paragraphs, and the conclusion paragraph in all of my essays. When I write my essays, I read over them to see if I can hear myself reading. When different people are talking in my essay I try to make the characters sound different. But when people read my essays they say they don’t hear me talking. When I hear that, I go home and write more essays for practice. I bring them in for my teachers to read and judge my writing. Now they say they can hear me read, and hear the different voice between the characters. I have been good with my conjunctions and punctuation. But when it gets to spelling, it is not that good. I had to study every night on my vocabulary words so I would be able to spell them on the test. This year I have learned how to spell some big words. My sentence formatting has gotten better ever essay I write. I had to study and read other peoples essays to learn how to make my sentence more organized.